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bring out the lead more, be a bit more bouncy with it, and by that i mean just put more or less pronouncment on each note to make it interesting, make it organic and flowing but with that extra step, that bounce that made the original so good.
that breakbeat needs some work, too hollow. sounds incomplete, and it is (at the 1:20ish mark in the sample). its missing a beat/kick here or one there, it sounds a bit simple. like where you use 2 kicks, there is room for a short kick or two in between to add some more life to it!
all in all, and most of those that do ask me for feedback know i'm ususally a bit constructive like i just was last two paragraphs, i don't normally go into any detail or feedback unless i think the track is worth pursuing! i think this remix is definitly happening and hope you touch it up a bit!
by the way, when you finish (if you rework this) i'd like a full copy if you don't mind!
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greg corbett | schedule | party107.com tracklists
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Progressive Transmission on Party107.com every Wed @ 5pm PST (8pm EST / 1am GMT)
Pacific Coast Frequencies on Danceradioglobal.com - trance every 1st Tues @ 4pm PST (7pm EST / 12midnight GMT)
Upcoming Gigs: none scheduled
Past gigs:
Phoenix Echo Aug 8th, 2009,
Believe @ Redroom, Feb and May 2009
Gareth Emery Boat Party - Aug 8th, 2008
Phoenix Outdoor Party - Aug 16th, 2008
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