the saw and melody overtop is very nice... i think the silence in teh breakdown is a little too excessive

everything comes together well, however... the saw melody in the background could use an increase in decay to sound a little more full/prevalent. sounds a little to plucky, imo.

best of luck finishing it up

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Last edited by EtherealSL on Jan-19-2005 at 04:43

Jay M: Thanks for your comment's.
As you say, this track is cheesy.I know .
I get boored when i produce "hard-styled" music. Don't know why tho.
The "rock-guitar" has a Distortion on it, maybe it shall be loosend a bit. The second guitar line is just a simple nylon with a heavy unison.
Maybe i could make a more progressiv mix of it later on?

>>FK: Thanks. not much but still pleasing

caddyshack: I'll try to bring it all together better in the final mix.
6 min is a bit long for the break to kick in tnx for your time.

EtherealSL: The Break will be phattend up in the final mixdown. Add some chords etc.
tnx mate!
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Very nice song and very nice melodies. The saw melody reminds me a lot a song to a nintendo game. I think it reminds me of the first Sim City actually.. Anyway, a very good song and quite unique for its style. Good work!

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Last edited by Northtribe on Jan-19-2005 at 12:16

Hey Robin - Love what you've done with the guitars! Nice idea that could've gone wrong but you've pulled it off. Melody is pretty sweet too!
Gets the thumbs up from me!

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Hey, very nice! I love what you've done with this. Very uplifting sound. The melody is indeed simple-- but catchy and the harmonies you add to it make up for the simplicity. This is how simplicity of melody can shine! I too think that this track ends a bit too abruptly, and a DJ-friendly ending should be considered... Good job!

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haha northtribe, exact feel I had as I listening to this track.

I felt like I was in a 3D super mario world on top of yoshi picking away at the beautiful apples while jumping in the blue sky...

Very imaginitive work you've got going here..lol

Good work!

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Nice Tune! ATM a sunrise tune, when u r drop from ur pills... LOL. Yeah agree not a dj friendly track.. The intro i mean

But a very relaxing tune!!!

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now this piece is special..

im a fan of happy melodies and uplifting tracks, and this track was pretty cool. when i first turned on the track and heard the guitar and saw the trackname (airforce - 1984) i thought of some remixed war-in-vietnam track or something like that, and it turned out to be that, and a mushroom-supermario-trip aswell, amazing track

the break at the end is a bit to long i think, i would absolutely love it there if you had a piece with breakbeats there.. with maybe the rockguitar or something.

the piano in the end im not so happy over either, it sound to.. weird, i would like a fat sharp synth there or something, or maybe a deep synthpiano as in Lexicon 4 - Reach Me (airwave remix).

anyways.. good luck. waiting to hear the update

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omg dude this tune is awesome. melody is gorgeous

yeah, very original stuff!
cheers

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W00t Robin , I've never seen u this humble before haha !
Anyway , I think I've had this track for a while now or atleast parts of it . It's a nice track indeed . The break is new for me and it's wicked aswell but I know that u could have done it a bit better . Put some more atmospheric sounds in it ! U use to do that perfect !

But once again , tight track dude !

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