idea for the remix is great, muddiness sux! make it sound nice please!

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didn't like it too much. sorry. look into some of the points made, tho.

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after reading the comments, and getting a special request to be played at arise.. I have reshaped it a little bit

enjoy!

thanks for the comments

Some good ideas here, i feel the track is let down totally by the lack of drive within the bass, just fills like a filler track. When the track comes back after the breakdown jus feels it lacks something, maybe a sub synth or something to keep it there

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umm, the eq really isnt as bad as some of you guys are saying! i read all the comments and expected this to be utter shit, its not. i can hear the tech influence in here, i think the filter on the main synth opens up too much, hence the dirty, trebley hiss whcih is probably why alot of people say it sounds muddy. Also the kick has very little power, give it some more sub! at the breakbeat section, too simple for me, im a fan of complex breakbeats, and where does everything go when that comes in? its like it all totally drops then the beat and bass come back in. work on adding more elements to the track, maybe make the transitions from phrase to phrase a little smoother, and certainly give the whole track a bit of a bass boost

nice effort

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ok here what you need to do drop a parametric on the master out channel load preset delete anyhting above 20khz and anything below 20hz. now lower the volumes on your percussion id suggest doing some panning effects on it slap some low reverb on your hats maybe a delay. now load a stero splitter/ enhancer plugin throw it in a fx send route some of your synths through it and do some stero tricks and then add some automated panning either that our link a lfo to panning. now get a good kick a strong one. one that rattles in 4/4. now load it into the mixer give it a bass boost boost all the lower end. make sure it thumps. and then use the kick you have now with it but eq them together better. and it should create a more techier sounding track becuase the kick in it now is way too cheezey.

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you have the wright ingreidents for a monster, i think mabey the build up has too much going on, an eq are all over the place, good attempt also the bass line seems a little flat
not a bad attempt

i think this is rather cool

it does need some eq work and the transitions need to be a lot smoother.

percs need thickening, they actually sound out of time during the breaks at the end

some of the synth programming is mint tho

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thanks for the replies dudes, hopefully my mixes will be much better since i just purchased studio monitors.. Imo my remix of alt+f4 cant touch my originals. So if you like what you heard stay tuned for more.

i like it! I agree about the beat needing to "thud" a bit more, and the highs sound too waterry in parts, clean it up a bit tho i think it would b brilliant


good luck

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