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Originally posted by DJ KaRiM NeT DJ-Kreing^^ .. ofcourse not but when you get signed you feel that there are ppl who listen to you .. u know what i mean ? i don't wanna get signed for $$ btw .. did u listen to the track ? retiro .. i know and ofcourse i produce coz i love trance .. if i don't love trance i wouldn't even try to produce a track ! but as i said above when u get signed u get attention so you work harder btw i'm still 17 years old

Not to sound horrible Karim but, you get signed when you have a decent track! That is why we have forums so you can share samples and then members can comment on your work! I am 24, having been producing for 3 years. I still haven't been signed! I have produced with Icone, yet that track hasn't been signed! Having my track on vinyl would mean the world to me! Walking into a club and seeing clubbers dancing to your work - money can't buy that! Until that time every piece of spare time I have is spent producing! I do it for the dream and the passion! Dedication does pay off Karim!!!!

Hey man, nice track. Quite psy proggy actually. I think that there is room in there for another lead synth arcing right over the top of everything. You a have a solid rolling track but its not standout imho. Work on a kick arse melody to give it a real direction and I think you'll see it really come together. The production is quite nice although I think the kick needs some work as others have said.

Good work, keep on hammering away at it!!

this track is pretty good, I love the intro like Sunquest said, the vocal 'Dj Karim Net' seems a bit 'cheesy', rework on the mastering too and it will be quite good !

retiro .. Thanx

Axolotyl .. Thanx for listening

d-miurge .. Thanx for listening and i'm working on the mastering

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Originally posted by d-miurge this track is pretty good, I love the intro like Sunquest said, the vocal 'Dj Karim Net' seems a bit 'cheesy', rework on the mastering too and it will be quite good !

I agree
the karim net thingy is just way off hand mann....


keep on workin on this track.. n stop thinkin bout geting signed straight away...!!


LaZ

got the dark feeling is working well.. the intro is nice

the song itself seems kind of redundant.. maybe try to fool around with the structure .. add take away layers or soemthing make the kick ins more dramatic (like ive mentioned before with your other production)

keep working at it..

abdallal
thanx 4 listening and i'm working on mastering now

Nrg2Nfinit
thanx 4 listening 'n wait 4 more

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mmm any more comments ?

Hey, not a bad track at all
if it were me id add some pads drenched in reverb, to really thicken it up. With a nice spooky chord progression... rowr.. :P either that or instead maybe do something with the rhythm of that main lead (the one with lotsa resonatey filterage), doesnt really flow enough in my opinion, sounds a tad jerky and needs something to feel the spaces that the rhymth creates. But just some pads over the top would really go down well i reckon.
although thats just my silly opinion :P
anyways, keep up the good work

Thanx for listening dude and i'm working on it and adding a new lead and i'll try add some pads

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