This is gourgeous.

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

personally i find the hi's to be ok and the sequencing excellent apart from that noise @ 1:13

however it sounds bare in spit of its complexity imo, the bass needs filling out and there needs to be a presence in the lower end spectrum for some beat percs or something, that area of the mixx sounds very barren and is harming the track a lot.

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I like the atmosphere.
Good synths and melody.
I think you make the bass more upfront in the mix.
The kick should be compressed. I noticed the volume goes up when there are less elements.
Good strings.
Great lead. I like it
I think you should add more precs.
Nice breaks.
There are two notes that stands out too much.
Those at the end of the bar.

Overall really good production.
4.6/5

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Thanks for all the feedback.

I reweighted the mix to have a more prevalent lowend, the highs sound as they should now by comparison. I'll get a sample up soon.

I reeeeeally need to get cracking on that demo cd, I keep getting sidetracked.

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2) MK-S - Illuminate (State of Matter Revival Mix)
3) Scarab - Vagabond (State of Matter Revival Mix)
4) Ferry Corsten & The Thrillseekers - Sublime (State of Matter Revival Mix)
5) State of Matter - Saving Icarus (Original Mix)

https://soundcloud.com/stateofmattermusic

sweet song, emotional melody, great breakdown

you know what i think (orchestral )

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NumberNin6 / Ethereal / Orana Project / Greenlight

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Originally posted by Luke Terry personally i find the hi's to be ok and the sequencing excellent apart from that noise @ 1:13 however it sounds bare in spit of its complexity imo, the bass needs filling out and there needs to be a presence in the lower end spectrum for some beat percs or something, that area of the mixx sounds very barren and is harming the track a lot.

Agreed. Other than that, it's a pretty nice track. Keep up the work.

Thanks.

Anyone else?

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Most recent tracks:
1) Ilan Bluestone - Spheres (State of Matter Eleventh Hour Mix)
2) MK-S - Illuminate (State of Matter Revival Mix)
3) Scarab - Vagabond (State of Matter Revival Mix)
4) Ferry Corsten & The Thrillseekers - Sublime (State of Matter Revival Mix)
5) State of Matter - Saving Icarus (Original Mix)

https://soundcloud.com/stateofmattermusic

a little mastering problem in your track.
but it's still good. the sound for the lead is good, i like it.
3.3/5 for me.


ps: see my thread please: http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=245310

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wow impressed i like the build up and synths, the breakbeat is very cool to. the strings in the break are nice to a very good track mate this could get signed for sure. Oh and the piano in the background is excellent

wow great harmonies... you really know how to stretch harmonies out to the next level... only thing i would do is maybe add some percs to even out the high hats.

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i think the track does exactly what it's supposed to do, i personally don't think it needs another melody, as has been suggested.

it sounds to me like the whole bottom end of the mixdown could do with lifting a bit, which may require you to take the kick down slightly

other than that, sounds excellent to me

i'd play it!

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