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Registered: Nov 2004
Location: Fresno, CA

What I love most of this track is the break part (3:09 - 4:54 minutes), beautiful pianos, nice break Beats and Exotic Drums , nice nice buildup for what was coming next.

A nice tune to listen in the car, or while you are trying to take a nap.
Very relaxing.



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Timothy
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Registered: Jun 2004
Location: Holland

Do something about that popping . Adding more elements wouldn't be a bad idea imo. But great job m8, it sounds really great


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activa
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Registered: Apr 2004
Location: York, UK

Im not too keen on some of the higher piano notes at times, but other than that its a very good remix, nicely done too!

well done mate.


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The Bio-Booster
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: London

I imagine summer parties on the beach of Ibiza with this! Kick needs more 'umpf' and the piano can be a bit too high in the frequency range sometimes, but I like the bass, as its powerful! (Just how I like it!)

Keep it up!

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sharvax
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Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Hong Kong / San Francisco, CA

Very well done!

Just beef up the kick and perhaps tone down the bass, and you've got yourself a great remix! Two thumbs up.


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rocksteady
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Registered: Jan 2003
Location: Connecticut

I love that bass! Dont turn it down! lol

not too familar with the Orignial..but this sounds good to my ears!


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Diginerd
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Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Stamford, CT, USA but from the UK

Wow.

That's a big track to square up to, and barring a few minor points you did incredably well.

Here are some pointers (in no particular order)

Kick is little weak. Mid to highs are all nicely balanced but it feels like there is a hole in your mix..

Piano slides in the drop end too abruptly. Suggest you fade the velocity off at the end.

Clicks on Guitar loop as noted elsewhere. Also there are some other assorted clicky samples that could do with a little tidying.

Structure is great too. The drop is mack on, keeping the vibe of the original, but adding a new twist to it. My only comment on the drop is that the filtering on the guitar is a little steep when it starts and is a little too heavily filtered to begin. If you start it a little higher and filter is up less you'd still get the effect you want and not make it too dull.

Breakbeat is interesting and different. Hard to do these days.

As it is I'd play it out right now as it is, but with those tweaks it would move from a solid B+ to an A+.

Great work, keep it up!

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Hawk L
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Registered: Dec 2004
Location: Oslo, Norway

Wow, really great to get all this positive and constructive feedback!

I thought I was going to put aside this track, and leave it as it is, but I think Išll give a shot on removing the clicking and master the tune properly...
I know the "clicking" is there, mostly on the guitar stuff, and thatšs because I could not manage to trigger the cutoff in hypersonic with the track automation (I use logic). So Išd put on a "autofilter" where I could do this, but then all those cliking noises came up... weird... if anyone know a better way to do this, it would be much appreciated!

So, I guess youšll be seeing a mastered and better version soon.

Thank you all, it is really inspiring with all this feedback!


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MekkaFIN
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Registered: Nov 2003
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Awesome stuff!


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