ahhh so this is what all ur deep red pics are talking about

very nice intro, very airwave style again
ud fit right into his label :P
to be honest, to make this track a hit, id change the clap to less trebly, make it more darker, make the clap longer and lower in treble, itll sound awsome
then secondly u gotta work on the piano, take off some delay, add loooooooots of fx to it, to make it sound rough, and dark, when it all hits at 3:35 its more happier than the first half
u gotta try to keep the same flow through the whole song
the notes on the new melodies are an octave too high,
once all that is done, hopefully itll sound better , otherwise fck me hehe
then itll be rockin

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very nice tune mate! very dreamy i agree with some points of sunquest though. ah well, there is always room for improvement
good job!

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thx for the nice feedback, guys!
very useful...!
i will probably rework the track a bit, with the mentioned point!
anyway...i dont want it to sound to dark...my intention was to create a deep atmosphere, but with some happier elements...i guess it worked!

i´ll keep you up to date!

nice chords and plucks, piano melody could be a bit more appealing i think.

the track really deteriorates in quality, the start was nice but now its gone downhill...

will check out ur next tune

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