Ive heard a hell of alot better, but it aint that bad man

good job

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Fear & Loathing @ Electric Daisy Las Vegas 2012/Miami Music Week 2012

listening to it now the intro is iffy the vocal shit is gay the kick is weak bass is hollow, just doesnt sound like the track is moving your synths sound like a compilation of loops no effects running no panning or anyhting go through and load your fx channels full. also on the compression you need to fix your ratio as its causing your synths to duck. also using superwave trance pro your going to want to fix it so when the vsti first kicks in it doesnt start phasing all whacked out so move the notes a little or render it as a wav file and remove the phased shit. yeah man i dont know honestly this wont ever touch the armin van buuren remix. and the snare build sounds awfully out of place and off beat when it starts might want to stutter it more and when it stops have a long ass decay on the reverb and heavy delay on it. the closed highat sounds out of place so does the super quite snare drum. pick a better snare sample and it should work better or replace the snare with a clap. might try dirting up your bassline make it more deep. theres my run down sorry to offend you just giving you some input and such.

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Thanx all for listening and wait for my next prorductions

and i appaerciate all of ur comments

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