very pro sounding track. the atmosphere from the intro til the end is great.
very interesting use of sounds.
hmm I think the piano is really a bit loud
the break is beautiful, but I'd make it longer.
as Wim said, when it all kicks in after the break, it lacks a bit of energy (and that's why I'd make the break longer).
another thing you could do is to add that badass long whooooo bassdrum fx right after the break....I don't know how to explain it..Robert Nickson uses it a lot anyway that's what I would do.

that's all I think.
good work, keep it up.

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Hey there mate,

Listening to your track right now and I have to say it really is a lovely track. I think you could emphasize the bass a bit more, it sounds weak not really pulsating even though the bassline is really nice melodywise.

Furthermore, dump the voicesample, it really does not add anything to the track.To be honest it hurts the track because the voice sample has an entirely different feel than the rest of your track. Besides that you use the voice samples during in- and out mix time of the track thus for Dj's it is not really handy And you use it during your beautiful break. Pity but I am the first to admit it is all a matter of taste

Other good stuff: Love the percussion your start with and introduce during build up. The mastering is quite nice, but like I said overall the sound is a bit flat. A nice bassboost could do wonders.

This track overall is a better than the hidden logic (I believe that was the title), my cimpliments!

Cheers,

Nomen Nescio

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Originally posted by Nomen Nescio Hey there mate, Listening to your track right now and I have to say it really is a lovely track. I think you could emphasize the bass a bit more, it sounds weak not really pulsating even though the bassline is really nice melodywise. Furthermore, dump the voicesample, it really does not add anything to the track.To be honest it hurts the track because the voice sample has an entirely different feel than the rest of your track. Besides that you use the voice samples during in- and out mix time of the track thus for Dj's it is not really handy And you use it during your beautiful break. Pity but I am the first to admit it is all a matter of taste Other good stuff: Love the percussion your start with and introduce during build up. The mastering is quite nice, but like I said overall the sound is a bit flat. A nice bassboost could do wonders. This track overall is a better than the hidden logic (I believe that was the title), my cimpliments! Cheers, Nomen Nescio

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nice intro, but i don't like the precs.
The kick is sooo flat man.
The bass is just plucky.
You need a real bass boost here.
the piano is too sharp for my ears.
good pads.
i don't like this sorry.
hidden scrolls was muchhhh better

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Kickin' butt. At first, it doesn't sound very good but after a minute or so, new melody kicks in and, wow, very nice. After that, more 'instruments' join the track which adds some variety to the song. The high pitched sound (almost at the end) is probably too high-pitched for my likings. Besides these, sounds really good. You could also improve or mute the voice -- don't really like it. My .02. In the scale out of 10, I'd give it an 8/10.