I have taken a listen to this at home now and one of the major factros that strikes me is that you could probably benefit from having some more bass melodies at various frequencies, it can even be as simple as just having something that complements the sub bass sound that you have.
If you take a listen to the pro songs you will very often find that they have at least two different basslines. Take for example 'AS the Rush Comes'... maybe not everyones choice in track but that has something like 4 going on.
Developing good basslines and melodies is an art in itself and one that should be studied as you will get some great results when you master the knack of doing so.
I don't think your lack musical ability or you wouldn't be able to put together what you have.
you have a lot of good ideas they just seem to be a bit all over the place. melodies are great, i can't come up with that melody, but their overall placement throughout the song just doesnt make it all compliment.
if you tell me how long youve been mixing i might compute in those factors into my analysis.
keep up the good work tho ^-^
Apr-12-2005 18:14
cartlemmy
tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Hesperia, CA
Yeah, I'm working on the structure...
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if you tell me how long you've been mixing i might compute in those factors into my analysis.
I've been mixing rock music since 1999, but thats kinda different than trance. I started trying to make trancish music last summer.
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