sounds very amateurish man..add more variety to your sounds.don't keep them so simple.nice melodies overall...and also get rid of that sound at 1:17 the rave acid sounds coz doesnt belong to your track..

thx for ur comments!

ok that's what i thought, the sounds at 1:17 are not for such a track... i'll replace them by something else.

djAlexg > i'm not a pro, that's why i'm here lol! but u're right this track is too simple... i will also work on an extended version.

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MEGA CHEEZE
I don't like this, it's not even trance.
I think it's eurodance. *pukes*
But actually it's better then most eurodance.
I know it sounds harsh... sorry about that.
I'm not trying to be rude or something.
I also doesn't have anything agienst you.
The vocals are ok.
I would add more delay and reverb on it.
The autotune is ok. Check delerium - after all to see whats a realy good autotune...

overall 2/5
sorry dude.

p.s.
I need a vocalist, can u send me a dry sample of her voice please.
I know it's not nice since i was like that with your track lol
I feel really bad.
pm me ok?

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Hey. Well, my ony complaint is that its too short. It is a bit on the euro side but in a good way, sounds somethign like QED - Hardly A Day. I would recomend that you maybe listen to Whiteroom - Someday a bunch of times, and get down the trick with using square waves to make it a more modern progressive trance track. Thats just my opinion though. Obviously The Drow has a bit different opinion lol. Wow man. That is pretty straight forward. Its cool that your honest about the way you feel about the track but then after bashing it, you expect to use the vocals from it? Lol...

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thx 4 ur comments!

the drow > it's not trance? yeah perhaps it sound euro but i think we can call that euro trance? or am i wrong? what sounds/drums dont you like? which sounds/drums sound like dance to your mind?

darksword > i dont know the tracks u told me the i will listen 2 them... and i'll do a longer version! =)

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as i said, everything sounds so cheezy...
the melody sounds like eurodance and euro trance is uplifting trance.
this is just commercial stuff.

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Not bad, pushing more towards Euro than mainstream vocal trance.

Interested in remixing though. Check PM!

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doesnt sound too bad, its very simple here and there, but i like the way its sounding to me, seems like everyone's wanting the voc for a remix tho :P

but yeh, its a little eurodance more than trance :S!

its not bad, its actually a nice song.

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JoeyEnv & AniG > ok i'll send u the midi file and the sample of the voice... in which music styles do u want to remix this?

the drow > why do u want a dry sample of her voice?

thx for all ur comments =)

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