Thanks Pavel and AniG for the comments

I definately learned a lot from the mistakes I made producing this track. I guess thats what its about... learning and moving on. I'm kinda glad I got that dreaded first track out of the way though and I'm applying what I've learned to the track I'm working on at the moment, so its all good =)

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The bass drum is pretty hard. I would consider revising it.
4.00 there's alot going on here, & Im not sure if it all goes together.
4.30 sounds slighly out.



Insane tune. heaps going on.

The hihats are swarmed by mids & hi synths & drowned out. Maybe add a hihat with more body.

Freaken Interesting one Axolotyl.

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After a bit, things really start to get muddy. EQing needs work.

One of your synths is detuned, and it's throwing the rest of the track off.

This track could really use some more punch in the low end. Make your bassline more well-defined.

I think that the tune could be very enjoyable given some more work in evening out your frequencies. That can help a lot. Also, take a look at all of your synths and check to make sure that they aren't detuned such that they throw off the rest of the track.

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Sweet, thanks guys, didnt expect this thread to get dug up again like this =)


Xeno: yeah that bass drum is freakin wierd, I agree. It sounds like an underwater explosion or something?!? Not sure what I was thinking there. Yeah, it has a lot of layers so was kinda hard to keep them all working together... I'm glad you like the complexity of it though.

Jex: Yeah, theres some nasty detuning on that lead synth plus I think the chords are a bit off key too. A few people have mentioned that one. Glad you think it has promise! I'd like to go back and remix it sometime and even out all those anomilies and master it a bit better. Got to move onto my next one for now though.

I learnt so much and put too many of my ideas into this track... it was bound to come out a bit odd... lol Thanks for your comments everyone... very much appreciated

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