Good stuff hear. Eq'ing needs some work.

peace,

Jay

awesome track!!!!

very moody, and groovy, and lot's of other stuff

2 things...the buildup is kinda borning, break is COOL but TOO LONG....I would think just shortening it JUST A BIT ( not too much) would do the trick

ANother thing....when it gets going, although it's cool, it can get a bit boring....i was into it at first, but now, after lsitening for a bit, im a bit bored....maybe if it built up a little bit as it goes along....it doesnt need anything big, but maybe just a little something extra.

still, great work

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quite a nice tune, just had a listen to this now, im totally digging that bassline man.. really groovy

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nice track mate... really nice! digging the bass line too!

- i don't really like that kick. i think it needs more bottom end
- like Massive said, I think the track needs some more atmosphere
- bass does sound nice and works well with the percs
- i'd change some percs around, that prominent one sounds a bit out of place imo

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