really nice start man
i like it.. keep working on it

nothing to comment on that haven't been said already

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But it's the same track as "Mayflower" Only, Mayflower sounds more finished...Eh...wtf?!

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Hi Mate,

i like this track very very much.has pure ASOT feeling and sounds bit like Master & Nickson sound.top notch work.

Riialto

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Originally posted by alexpea But it's the same track as "Mayflower" Only, Mayflower sounds more finished...Eh...wtf?!

to be honest, mate, it really its NOT.

probably you mean the structure, which is really similar to Mayflower i agreed, about it, only because i like that structure, and i builded up using that structure to the climax, but if you listen to the melody, i really don't think its the same melody as Mayflower, or i can send you both midi files, and we will see...the buildup also really different to the one i played around in Mayflower, i will update this sample later, with the buildup in it, and you will see...

overall, agreed about the 2 tracks have kinda really similar instruments, effects and so on, however they are pretty different in other ways, but you will see it clearer once i will post the final versions of both tracks here

anyway, thanks to everyone for the comments, suggestions about the track,

i keep them all, and trying to make the track better at the moment!

cheers,

Peter

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Hi Peter,

beautiful melodies again,very uplifting and inspiring.
i think you have overused REVERB,especially in that main melody synth.this tune have a great feeling,like all your productions.Just try to eq-it better.main melody is too sharp IMO.
pads are very uplifting,but try to add some lower freqs. to them.
eq-it better and this will be killer tune.

keep on work mate you have great potential!

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Originally posted by Timothy Nice work although the bass lacks low frequencies.

was about to say that. i realize its still in early stages, but yeah, need to fill out that low end a bit more, its a good bass, but its too 'simple' right now. maybe mess around with the kick, either try different ones or try tweaking, to make it better. sounds kind of flat at the moment.

great friggin melody mate. guess this is what happens when mycron goes logic-al

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WoW awesome as always

as u know my comments just u need some equalizing + nice buildup = got a massive track

Keep it up

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Hey. Your last works have been good, looking forward to this.

-Awesome use of pads. Very professional sounding.
-Good arpeggio. I like the filtered yet light sound youve gotten with it.
-Your kick is a bit too light on the upper frequencies.

Its too bad this track ends so quickly . Need to hear the full version. If the rest of the track is as good as the intro, then you definantly could have a tune here.
Grade A

Cheers,
Zac

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Good job again, cool sounds and nice melodies. Overall it could use a better mix imo, but i have to agree with alexpea a bit also. It sounds a lot like Mayflower, not that this is bad, but you use a lot of the same synths and effects in this one. But this one is also very good. In your next track i want to hear something different (or should i say 'in our next track' )

Hey Petey!

This is a fantastic song! You never disappoint.

The kick needs a boost.

I like the choir pads.. the make the toon very sweet.

You really are consistent with style, which is great. After hearing your last few toons its becoming easy to recognize the Mycron style.

I know you've got some big things coming.. looking forward to hearing them very much!

Keep it up buddy,
Trev

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quite a nice song there peter, very nice and relaxing trance almost like the thrillseekers style ( big compliment ).

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