Cool track, well arranged.

It's very difficult to help you out with your mixing and mastering for the following reason:

You uploaded a 160KBPS mp3 file. Please upload a 360KBPS mp3, then we can help you out more on the specifics of your mix and master.

The low end sounds decent though, make sure you compress the rest of your instruments (yes, all of them ! make that final waveform nice and tight), and make sure you cut off 16KHz +, I can hear a very loud frequency at some points that would completely destroy a dancefloor.

Good job on the rest, and hopefully we can get a better quality soundfile! Cheers.

Update: finished the track... thanks for your help!

cheers,
S-Tune

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