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Nice theme you made there, some elements are bit missing though.
it needs a lil bit of spunk in it. the dark sounds are gd.
<>Convergence<> hehe

Keep up the good work

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Your breaks seem to not compliment the rhythm of the rest of the track well. I'd suggest fixing the kick to be more reminiscent of the lead.

You need to get some more sounds and energy in the higher frequencies. As it is, your track seems small without a full frequency range.

In fact, in general, the track could stand to be louder. EQ and Compression needed.

4:48 may be a joke, but you should keep it. It's totally awesome, IMO.

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erm.. sorry I dont really know what you mean by

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You need to get some more sounds and energy in the higher frequencies. As it is, your track seems small without a full frequency range.

I just started producing actually could you describe it another way please?
4;48 ? Ill think about it

to sayoon

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some elements are bit missing though.

wich elements

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Originally posted by Ste i think this is the basis of a great tune, and this is the sorta trance i play/spin. i have to say that making the sounds a lot more "dirtier" qwould imporive it, like rougher, raspier synths. also a harder kick maybe (although this is more a personal prefrence )

exactly ! thats my style .. I just cant seem to get just that little right touch

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Last edited by Takkra on May-24-2005 at 20:59

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I just started producing actually could you describe it another way please?

What I'm trying to say is that your treble sounds aren't of equal volume with your bass sounds. Maybe make your hats louder and advance the treble on your snare's EQ. Heck, you should probably make your snare louder in general.

When I say you need a full frequency range, I mean if you look at a spectrum analyzer of your track, the treble side of the analyzer is largely silent.

You should probably read up on EQing and compression to get a good idea of how those those concepts are used to make your tracks louder and fuller.

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another update.. it started to sound different.. don't know if its good or not
well what do you all think?
should I work on this one or the other version?
or both , and what should I work on.. except the endings

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U improved ur sound a lot with the update dude, this is going to be a kick ass track bro .
Kopi =o.

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