Thanks man, yes you are right about the ending and the pads at the breakdown, I've been listening and need to change that. Ill update it when I have time - fucking exams
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May-25-2005 08:55
Az
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liking it
synths sound a little thin though
May-25-2005 12:14
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Yeah I might update it if i have time.
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May-27-2005 12:41
alexpea
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You have chosen very beautiful soundsamples in this one, mate! And I think it sounds nice and chilled. You're developing, I can hear!!!
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May-27-2005 13:25
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Thanks , Alex i like to think im improving
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May-27-2005 23:28
dj jasonF
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i like the bassline the drums percs and stuff.
i dont really like the pads. you could use a more up-front sound after the break cuz the pads are just perfect and you have to show it.
i like the bleeps or whatever they are.
i dont like the break when the pads start. i guess you were going for a short break so (just an idea) add whoshes and fx b4 the beat stops and then a big fat reverd boom bam smack w/e, with the pads starting with it. no need for overused lowpass plus if you use lowpass you d have to make a bigger break imo.
overall i think its missing some dynamics in general maybe compression could fix it dont know or maybe its my speakers. its a very good remix but i dont know... i wouldnt buy the vinyl for example. maybe because its very progish for me.
maybe ill remix it too! but there's no way theres gonna be a remix better than the original imo.
May-28-2005 09:54
gerrycueto
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maranjana is one of my favorite songs... I'm gonna have to check this out
Originally posted by dj jasonF
i dont really like the pads
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Originally posted by dj jasonF
after the break cuz the pads are just perfect and you have to show it.
Thanks though man for the feedback, and gerry.
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May-29-2005 19:32
Massive84
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good beatwhen it begins man (y) nice signature sounds as well to mix in.
That reverbed synth is cool indeed.
I dig the bassline you made.
Not allot of perc, i like that tbh. but they are bright enough.
2.30 that pad can be a tiny bit louder imo.
3.32 you should break it down there imo.
4.55 nice pads, but here the transition sounds so sudden.
I am missing some dynamics here as well, also some transitions sounds a bit rough , they need to be looked on.
Further i think this can be very nice, but i would re-arrange it personally.
I also must add, the first 1.30 min were giving me this nice vibe with the reverbed sounds and such, but later on i felt the feeling is gone.
Thats all mate and tnx for review
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May-29-2005 20:24
dj jasonF
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Thanks though man for the feedback, and gerry.
no worries. its just personal preference... im more of a superstring guy
May-29-2005 22:15
sndh
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Location: Amsterdam
really warm feeling in this track, i LOVE it! i guess i can play it if i want to?
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