Woah WOAH. Very weird. Definately not what I'm used to hearing. Which is good.

Is this theme music to death carnival rave? (j/k)

During the main part of your track I don't think the strings work with the melody or acid line as much. Others have commented so I won't go into yet.

The gated vox sounds pretty cool.

Very dark atmosphere. I agree that a minimalist style can give a greater opener, darker feel. For this to feel more interesting... I would probably add a few more layers. Whether it be more effects, maybe another pad. Maybe a creepy sub-bass break down?

Keep up the exellent work. This being not my style (nor do i listen to this particular genre) I can't really give you great advice, it's just my opinion. From the sounds of it, it's pretty damn neat.

Adam

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Hey,
Listening ... U need to create more athmosphere to this, the intro it's too sudden imo, try to present the theme alone first, then adding the rest of the elements, also I think your drums sound too beatmachine , listening to this I imagine some full drum set, playing with all the hats, toms, etc, try to add more percussive elements and FX into the background .
The 4x4 Beat is interesting, but for some reason the strings feel away, try to balance better all the elements so they sound more like an overall.
In overall, this has potential to be a kick ass track, the strings melodie it's pretty sweet, creates a good feeling/Athmosphere by itself, ur sounds sound clean, I just would work more with all the Drums/Percusions and for the intro I would extended, adding a lot of FX and that, good work mate keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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