I dont like hte kick either, sounds very ploppy and hollow. I like the bass rythemn but it also sounds very static. I hear some minor out of tune ...something ...in the intro, its one of the synths. I think all your synth sound really thin, all those small bleeps and stuff, they are nice to fill it up but i miss some bigger sounds, it all sounds to thin. I dont like the piano in the break...sounds eyr mono and as said, its too low. Main melody coming up now. Main synth is hard to follow and then all of a sudden a climax ?? very weird. Main synth is overpowering everything to be honest (and im listening the high quality sample) .

Sorry i think alot can be improved here.

Stijn

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