Lets have a listen then , abora == connected...or im a wrong?

Listening , again that banging icone kick and those nice acids, your acids are always banging. I agree with everyone else with the first vocal stab, it is not in key with the beat .

Ah the arp , i was waiting for that. I think the pads are a bit to overwhelming, arp is barely hearable. I should look at those pads, they dont sit very fine in the mix for some reaon, dont know why. Break now.
Nice chords, im not to keen on vocals in general, i rather keep it to just stabs and choirs , but these are ok. Melody is awesome as usual, very catchy. Break is indeed very long, i can remember a pretty old track by u which also had a very long braek, icone - wonder if im not mistaken .

Seriously...drop the vocal haha i dont like it, the rest is great. I know it is harsch to drop the vocal but at least also make a dub version of it

Stijn

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Hey, thanks for further comments!

I'll definately also make a dub mix with only the vox parts, since I know some people don't really like vocals in general. That way I'll also be able to cut the breakdown a bit shorter like in the original. I'll also remove the volume effect on the first vox, I reckon it sounds better without it after all.

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good stuff wim, can't really add anything else.

the out of sync kinda vocals, you can fix that by running the fl sampler thru the lfo and link to bpm so it chops on beat if you wish.

bass + kick are really good, production is generally really good and clean aside from the minor technical issues. not a huge fan on the melody, but it is very well done

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nice drive, great quality..

niice effects..

the vocals are great..

good melody..

the vocals doesnt fit this kinda track in my opinion..

if u dont mind, i would like to remix this one...

and i think Icone feat Shyenne - Sorrow would be an more appropriate name (spell)

otherwise good work

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This track is good. But I've heard better from u.
Her vocals is nice. Like the feeling in her voice!

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Hey Wim!

What can I say! Top notch production as ever. That bassline is awesome, really drives the track along at a rate of knots. The acid sounds really add to this too...

I think the vocal effects in the intro (the doo-doo's and dah-dahs ) should be more subtle. Melody is good as as the synths, but we've come to expect that from you now.

All in all. Great work, and thanks for sharing!

(this is the same vocalist that did the vocals in your remix of Diamond Dust, right?)

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Definately top notch. Gave me shivers a couple of times. I can't find anything wrong with it. Great performance by the vocalist too!

Any chance I could get my hands on a higher bitrate mp3?

Hey it's Sarah

I didn't think the do do do's were out of sync at all
Either way I love the song Wim. You know that

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Thanks all, much appreciated!

I'll post an updated version soon, as well as a dub remake. I'm happy with the way the vox'es are now though. No higher bitrate version yet as long as it's unfinished and unreleased, sorry...

Sarah indeed did the sweet vocals in my Diamond Dust remix as well!

// Wim

PS: Hi Sarah

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great job Wim once again,

also sweet vocals in there,

can't suggest too much what already have been said, i would use some reversed aahs in a few places, though,

looking forward to the updated version and the dub,

keep it up!

Peter

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Great track!
I liked the melody, and the vocals, best part was the bassline

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