I'm sorry but I have to agree with Elevation. The melody is a bit strange in this remix. Only some tones is right!

The arrangement is cool. Cool effects!
Why don't make a new song of it? With your own melodies.


Keep it up

/Moolow


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//Moolow

Yeah, theres some crackling in the kick for sure. Could just LPF it maybe or notch it where the crackles are.

Theres a LOT of reverb on some of the elements and they are just sitting way back in the mix.

Nice tubular sound at 2.00. Dont know the original, so cant tell if it suits it or not. Again, it sounds very reverbed. Your loosing a lot of sparkle due to this.

A lot of the elements in this track sound too filtered. Like the clap for instance. Try a band pass on some of these elements instead of a low pass.

So are you Allen or are you Bream? =)

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I'm done working on this track. It was getting worse as I tried doing things and adding more and I would have to start over to fix it.

I've began a remix of Oceanlab - Clear Blue Water

It is much better quality and i've learned some things about compression now.

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Originally posted by everyMan That lead reminds me something! Did you use the Vstation patch I posted in the production forum ?

Yeah

Thanks...+1 for the patch

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Originally posted by Elevation i know but to at least have the correct melody in ther eat some point...and then vary it....would be good.....only a suggestion

I think it's the same? Maybe a octave higher or a different sound that's confusing you. I just listened to clear blue and this and they sound exactly the same lead

no worries.......ill give you the MIDI for the lead

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Originally posted by Elevation no worries.......ill give you the MIDI for the lead

I don't need it

I'm done with working on that song.

it sorta sounds ok, it's a nice take but it needs to sound fuller really.

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