Thanks Four_On_Four-er on your feedback. I'm glad u think it's Ok. Hopefully I can try to make it better.

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The mastering on this sounds really good to my tired ears.

The melody is good, but its just too epic for my tastes. Like I siad in a previous post... you hammer it too early on. Theres little emphasis on the tension and buildup a good trance track needs to give the melody a point of reference.

Having siad that, your working with a very unique style and not working with a cookie cutter trance structure which is very commendable. Keep at it. You have a unique style but I just think you need to refine your structure a little more. Its not easy, but keep at it!

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Very nice track, its very upbeat but not right in my face about it. It kinda goes on and on though, maybe you could vary the melody a tad more.

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Hey Axolotyl. Thanks for those kind words. I'll work on my structure more. I think trance is one of the hardest music to make. I just hope I can get this down soon. =)


what's going on slyfoxark. Thanks for listening. I'll have to practice on my style more and hopefully this song or my next will be in your face. I'm still not satisfied with this song so I'll just go to my dark lab and go to the drawing board.

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