it's a great origional; and a good idea to remix.

your drums are horrid though - that bassdrum sounds thin and crappy; I'd redo all of the drums if I were you - with better samples (and a layered kick - so important to this style of music)

could do with a bit of a speed up - just 4-5bpm.


why not take that sweet little portamentoed lead in the original and add a new version to yours?

these tracks are all about the basline and bass drum - they need some beefing

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electropophouse...
I don't think that this track fits for this forum...no addict no trance...

peace

no its cool not many like trance anymore anyways lol

ps the remix was quite alright

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i enjoyed this sequencing to live instruments can be difficult

Simple, neat and groovy dude

Nice remix

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Good feeling of the track. Great job m8.

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Originally posted by optik it's a great origional; and a good idea to remix. your drums are horrid though - that bassdrum sounds thin and crappy; I'd redo all of the drums if I were you - with better samples (and a layered kick - so important to this style of music) could do with a bit of a speed up - just 4-5bpm. why not take that sweet little portamentoed lead in the original and add a new version to yours? these tracks are all about the basline and bass drum - they need some beefing

a good try though...
but i prefer the original version intro came 1st, than proceed with your version.
need some rework on the basslines

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Originally posted by linkmage electropophouse... I don't think that this track fits for this forum...no addict no trance... peace

What a dumb thing to say. There are all kinds of stuff being posted here every day, from ambient to hip hop... and it's all welcome.

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