BTW, its rather the bassound I dont like, not the location of it, perhaps try some other bassounds for that sequense that starts off at 0:42 that might fit in better but maybe its just me =p

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Originally posted by tonkproject well mate thanx a lot ... seems to me that you haven't felt so ofended by my 64kb vers or my "atitude"... CHEERS

obviously then, you thought you offended me..lol?

I was asking a GENERAL question to you. And maaybe you should reply with a decent answer next time.

no i don't own TA..if i did many things on this section would be different.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

i didnt thought...the way you replayed first showed like you felt more than offended.anyway....you still own me an quick feedback

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Originally posted by >>FK BTW, its rather the bassound I dont like, not the location of it, perhaps try some other bassounds for that sequense that starts off at 0:42 that might fit in better but maybe its just me =p

it is right that the bass sounds a little bit out the track but that was my intention ... it does give a tricky thing until the saw is entering.the track it is mastered and sent already ... but i will try that and maybe something nicer will come'out...

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Originally posted by tonkproject i didnt thought...the way you replayed first showed like you felt more than offended.anyway....you still own me an quick feedback

very well.

Good start, nice perc. Driving .

the transition is at 1.37 is nice, increases more drive, however this happens to fast. build it a bit. At 1.37 you should remove the kick and perc and filter up that low octave saw with the plucky stabs.

1.52 nice reverse clap there, good delay usage.

I am liking the bass here.

The break isn't doing it for me, the sounds are quite nice but i miss the conection to the theme.

Alright your going for pure progressive with nice sounds and a driving beat, i dig that but i do feel that the break could be shorter then.

imo it's a nice tune, and i recognize the pluck from the last tune you posted here but couldn't finish because of an file error or something? i liked the other one more but this one is different, less melodic.

Nice tune for the clubs, good luck with it

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

It's quite bland in my opinion. The breakdown is way too long and I recommend shortening it. But if you want to keep it long then add more elements to it such as percussions or synths to make the track less boring. My main point is that this song needs more substance.

As far as the 64kbps encoding. I could care less. I'm sure you probably did that to prevent bootlegging. I would have done the same also.

100% right mate....the breack it is like from another tune and the only thing that connect them is the pluck...anyway thanx a lot for your feedback...

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