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Good tune, musically all there - nice melodies, pretty standard but effective layout.
Production is clean and pro-sounding, although not incredibly intricate - although that doesn't really detract from the quality of the track (I just tend to prefer really intricate production  )
Only got a couple of thoughts - firstly, in the main break where the strings come in at 2:11 I think you could either do with more layers of strings to make it sound like a full orchestral job, really grab the atmosphere, or instead maybe put in some sweeping atmospheric kind of sounds to 'give it a bit more' if you know what I mean, keep it interesting.
Also, the perc in the main section could do with a bit more variation, it sounds like it's literally just a 2 bar loop which, although it doesn't sound bad, I think would sound better with more changes in the patterns to keep it interesting.
That's all 
6.5/10 - looks like I'm getting a bit precise in my old age
(Scale: 0 = don't bother, 1-3 = needs work, 4-5 = nearly there, 6-8 = releasable, 9-10 = outstanding)
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Last edited by Stu Cox on Aug-30-2005 at 22:14
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