Hi,

I like your melodies very much, good job on that. The break could use a bit more imo (some soundeffect or something). Try to use better sounds and effects, they sound a bit cheap, especially the bass. The kick is not that bad, maybe try to eq it a bit more. Overall a nice track, but try to let it shine and sound more pro.

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...nice synthwork there. Good choice of sounds. Don't like kick, seems too weak.

Typically ASOT style...


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