hehe the song name reminds me of skateboarding as a little kid

it's cool, i don't have much of anything to add or say, but i like it

ah yes this is real psy in comparison to my track, i see what you mean now. very creative work man i think is hard to create this kind of atmosphere.

excellent work man kinda missed some sort of break but i guess real psy doesnt use trance breakdowns. good stuff you should send this off

I can hear you've tried to make an energic track, and it actually has a lot of potential. Nice melodies and basslines. But the soundquality isn't all that, imo. The kick for example sounds too muted.. Also the bassline...

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Being a huge psytrance listener myself and attempting work on my first psytrance track, this is very, very nice Axolotyl! You've really got that psy bassline down. May I ask what you used to create that with? I've been experimenting with several VSTis such as Bassline, VB1, TauPro, and others trying to attain such a sound. Percussion and everything is clean and crisp. Very nice work keep it up! Hopefully my psy track attempt will be half as good as yours when I'm through.

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listened to it and really like it! great job dude!

i make some tunes to but afraid to post them since they are rather.. newbish?

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Originally posted by Axolotyl Thanks rich. Well I intentionally tried to make more of a club psy track, so I'm glad you think it would work on the dancefloor. Would be interesting to hear it remixed as a trance track, I wonder if that would work considering all the wierd fx and sounds? Would probably sound a more progressive then psy I imagine. Anyway thanks for your feedback mate =)

i wouldnt say rmx'd... id say it would be cool if the main weight of it was saved until after a psy break near the middle just so the track would be more mix friendly and intergrateable.

i was pleased to comment on your track

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Thankyou gentelmen for your comment and constructuve critiqe =)

@extalin - Glad you like it dude. Yeah, I used to skate too, but kickflips were about as far as I got..

@Dannyc - A few people have commented on the lack of break so I think I'll work on the structure some more. Full on psy does indeed use pretty huge breaks though (just not long ones)

@alexpea - Hey, thanks for the reply mate. Big fan of your productions actually, so its great to have your feedback! I tend to agree with you re: the bottom end though. Well spotted. In the process of addressing this. God damn basslines are tricky.. lol..

@Magnus - Bassline was created with Synth-1. Very good for creating basslines I've found. Usually requires boost around 200-500 Hz and some multiband compression around 1.2Hkz. Good luck with your track, I'll keep an eye out for it.

@Dj Cola - Keep at it mate and dont be afaraid of criticism. Only way you'll learn.

@richg101 - Like I said to Dannyc, I'll prob end up restructuring the track slightly to give it more of a intro-break-main-break-main-outro progression since everyone has commented on that. Likely extend the strart and end to make it more DJ friendly too.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciated and very halpfull =)

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thanks dude anyways congrats on a really nice track

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I think your bass could be a bit thicker. Then again, I'm only listening on my headphones.

I think you need some more percussive sounds. It kind of lacks the drive that percs can give it.

Nice gating.

I really like this melody. It almost sounds like it's in a major key. It's downright happy. Not unlike the Prosper remix of Popcorn.

Nice ending

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