For starters, very good drum arrangement for what you're going for. The drums need to be a bit rounder and less dry, but the beat is there.
The little organ part needs some thickening too.
The first break sounds great. I might add some more echo (or diversify it) to the low sample. The re-entrance of the drums was nicely done.
Generslly well done, and the song is nicely arranged. I think overall you need to thicken some sounds, and give them more warmth, but the concept is definitely there.
Oct-06-2005 16:17
BshidoHEAT
don't be that guy!!!
Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Ninjas never tell....
Very good track, I do like the breakdown a lot.
I'll agree with tribu, it just needs some thick(er) and warm(er) sounds.
hmmm sweet stuff man. the main drive (or lead, dno, whatever) is really catchy, combined with some nice breaks and a solid melody. that's how I like my breaks.
btw, it's really funny, i've been listening to a couple of new trance sets the last few days, and there is hardly a tune that really caught my attention. And today I listen to some stuff on this board and it's all great!
keep it up everyone here, you're keeping my trance scene alive
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Oct-06-2005 22:24
mezzir
BEES?
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: assachusetts
lol ya listen to tree
love the concept and the melody and whatnot, and esp. that sample at 1:15 or w/e
but yeah, drums sound way too dry for my tastes
and maybe a tad bit more reverb or some delay on the lead synth?
idk
love the sound, just doesn't quite do it for me
comin along great though
hummm theard the mix. frankly i have never heard he Orignals so i dont know whats the major change in it. sounds cool music to me. But yes like others say the Volume problem is still there ... i had to max up my speakers to get the compleat feel of the music ..
Saw your Setup on bedrom dj pic. F****ing sexy Numarks mannn ...
Keep tripping.
Simzz
Oct-09-2005 05:02
vA|sYn[D]rOm
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Bytom - Poland
i've never heard orginal could you post it here?
imo good song even if i don't listen to these kind of tracks =]
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Oct-09-2005 12:11
richg101
1010101010101010101010101
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: a universal nation
nice drums and an original style. loads of atmosphere. i think a better synth tone for the main melody would make the track a hell of a lot stronger. maybe something similar to the other sounds used during the break. i like the guitary sounding bass line. would be good to have a deep low bass drone behind it tho. bit of delay/reverb on the main melody wouldnt go a miss...
very clean sounding work.
thanks for sharing.
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Oct-09-2005 14:44
Allied Nations
Make it happen cap'n
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: MTHELL
richg101: Thanks man i am glad u liked it! im not sure how much more editing im gonna do on this tune, but i have another couple in the works and ur suggestions will be very useful! ty for teh listen
simzz: glad u liked it.
mezzir: yeah this is one of my firts "real" tunes.. but more along the way!
Gladius: thanks for the listen its always good to hear something u dont generally listen to and like it!
As for the original, its a freind of mine's tracks he basically just gae me th emelody, originally a tech house tune! he just gave me the melody and a bit of the drums.. will put on yousendit later for those interested.
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Oct-10-2005 03:12
Echo of Silence
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2003
Location: corner of the garden
woooooooot! Gredder Greg! you r0ck!
This tune pwns me! I'm on my 3rd listen.
I'd like to hear the original too, Greg, so if you get it up let me know somewhere, please. I'd like to compare original with the remix just for the fun of it.
So, yes, I'm thoroughly enjoying it. It's got enough diversity to keep my interest.
Question (an maybe PsyT will help me with this if he's in irc later)...what genre?
I'm trying to learn to distinguish between the different genres now.
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Oct-29-2005 13:41
trancedanne
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Lidingö, Sweden
Great track, if you are using reason you can contact me & we can collab or something because im also doing breaks/progressive
Oct-30-2005 21:51
Allied Nations
Make it happen cap'n
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: MTHELL
quote:
Originally posted by Echo of Silence
woooooooot! Gredder Greg! you r0ck!
This tune pwns me! I'm on my 3rd listen.
I'd like to hear the original too, Greg, so if you get it up let me know somewhere, please. I'd like to compare original with the remix just for the fun of it.
So, yes, I'm thoroughly enjoying it. It's got enough diversity to keep my interest.
Question (an maybe PsyT will help me with this if he's in irc later)...what genre?
I'm trying to learn to distinguish between the different genres now.
breaks! thanks! im glad u enjoyed this and my set!
trancedanne - ill be contacting you soON!
Any more listeners?
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Nov-06-2005 17:09
simzz
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2005
Location: Bombay, INDIA
hey Greg ! i am back .. i gave your track to some of my friends and even they Liked it.. i am not at all a PRO in making new music YET (as you already know that) but still trying to do some shit :P
I made a Short Mashup of your Track with a genre transformed. IF you allow me ill post it in here & am sure u all will like it
