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Originally posted by staticblue beginning sounding pretty solid, nice percs nice high-bass coming at 30 seconds, i think the subbass is nice but needs more presence and power to it or just another layer, up to you darkish stuttery synths coming in the buildup about 2:00 i think it needs a bit more drive, maybe try some additionnal percs layers or something. main melody is quite anthemic, but simple thats why i think it needs a more massive synth to support it and it will work very well ! definitly my favorite track from you uptill now, cool uplifting parts

I second static poop :P, very good track mate .
Kopi =o.

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The bassline sounds pretty cool, has a nice dark feel to it.

Main lead is a bit overpowering.

Good song, energetic and pumping. Just feel a bit thin around the bass area. Perhaps boost the low ends

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Guys.. thnx again for ur reply...

i think i get my error now.. beside of mastering

-the lead is too loud n the snthy is use is no good.
-Subbass needed
-composition need to be fix..

ok then.. working for it..

Thank You! CHeers!

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really enjoyied ure tune and want you to know that you sound proffessional, the melody and sounds are good and fills. at the end of the day getting that killer melody will happen one day the main thing is the tune has alot of good sounds and they are present and clear

isrefel