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great tune ron but i think your mix down of the synthwork is messy. Everything is packed in the middle frequencies and it makes it sound very blurry. I also think the stereo spectrum could be filled better.
Then about the track itself. I think your intro is to monotone, nothing really hooks me in the intro...it just goes and goes without orginal elements or unexpected stuff happening. Break now, nice sounds, the synth that is playing sounds a bit thin. The real main synth is coming up now, i like the sound of it, melody cannot bother me though. Then the bassline comes in, sounds better now. All of a sudden the kick comes in, would like to hear some sort of reversed stuff there. Climax is disappointing, almost boring. I think you should try not to reveal all sounds already in the climax. You use AND the strings AND the leads AND all the other sounds straight at once in the climax, and i hear those same things looping from the beginning of the track which makes the climax rather boring, it brings nothing new to it.
Dont get me wrong, you got some great sounds going on hear, the bottom line of the track is awesome and so are the percs, but structure wise and mixing wise i would change some stuff.
Stijn
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Indeed the drive in this track is great. It has a lot more uptempo feel than many of your other tracks which will make this one more playable in clubs as well. For me you are one of the better producers here on TA and you have developed yourself quite a bit in just a few months time.
