bassline(tips)-you can try sending bass in FX cahnnel nad try Stereo enhancerktehn try a bit more low freqs

Strings circle(all the song)-this is awesome...godish....

0:21(synth arp)(very low volume)-need some widen,maybe a little chorus should help...

1:14(when pad starts)-there need fade in for pad before this moment

2:08 starts trance-there need Big reeverb for pads and auotomating them to hogh cutoff..

3:29-please look at bassline tip

maybe 4:26 need fade in kick(please do work with volume in piano roll)

4:32(man synth)-need some delay,maybe some filter work(some resonance)

structure-very good(trancish)

mastering-8,5

song idea-9(from 2:08-10)

overall-you going right

9/10