This seems more melodically complex than some of your other stuff. I can't say I disapprove.

Good gating sounds.

I think your hats could be a bit louder and sparklier. Particularly the offbeat stabs. You certainly have room for them.

Good acid arping.

Y'know, maybe the hats don't need to be very loud. It sounds like a really good dub right now.

9:15 is tight.

Excellent outro. It leaves me with a feeling of completeness. Heh.

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Damn cyber... good shit.

Yea, loving it's psy sound, and it's progressive sound. I've been listening to more and more tracks off of iboga... I'm sure you've heard of them.

Anyway. I really do like the progression, and as far as melodic is concerned, it's more melodic than some progpsy! So I get what you mean.

Great sounding kick. And that deep bassline in the background and pads are wicked.

Good work.



(/me burns cd and puts in car to drive to Seattle (stupid art instute so far from my house )

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very nice start followed by a smooth and trippy flow "through ages".
I don't like the synthline beginning at 2:55. now were at 4:25, and have reached another age . cool and mystic pad, like it. especially in combination with the deeply reverbed percs.
ahhhh 5:51 fits perfectly !!!! really kicks me . mmmmm, the synthline following at 6:20 doesn't fit, destroys the trip :/
at 7:20 again :/
8:15 gets interesting again, but then, 9:15 the melody reminds me too much of those old amiga games, sorry.

altogether, nice atmosphere, very good flow which suits the topic "through ages" very well. mixing sounds good on my monitors. but some of the synthlines are just not my cup of tea.