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Noooo. Don't go for a whole main section thing. It's totally not necessary.
Anyway. I like the rawness of your bass line.
You see? The breakdown sets a mood, then lets the song carry the mood by proxy without needing to be melodic at all.
I didn't notice it the first time, but the sound that starts back in at 2:48 sounds kinda cheesy, especially during the legato articulations. Call me a fogey, but I think that would do well staccato the whole way through, and a little filtered to get that "radar ping" sound that a lot of old school trance had.
Keep it up.
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