Intro is cool, lots of ambience. Swirly noises are well done. That snare feels really retro for some reason. Its cool, but a wee bit more dynamics in it might help give the track more body.

Bassline is great and give the track a real driving groove. Top marks there.

Synths around the 6 min mark are very cool indeed. I feel they need more prescence though and are just a tad thin at the moment. It would be great to have them drive the track just that bit harder.

This is quite different to your previous tunes and one of your best so far. Infact what i was saying about theme in your other thread... this is exactly it. This track has god craploads of it. Its simple, cohesive and does a few things really well. Good work!

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Last edited by Axolotyl on Nov-16-2005 at 04:46

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Originally posted by alexpea The kick isn't mono, and that is kinda irritating when listening with headphones... It's pumping way more on my left ear!!!

exactly...


this song is much better than the song i heard on your audiojelly page. i think you need the low end to be pumping a lil more.... mainly the bass. the percussion that comes in at 1:36 is way too loud, and gets a little annoying over time. Those congas sound louder than your kick. also, not much new is presented in your track as time goes by, tends to get a bit monotonous.


not much else to say, i like the dark atmosphere you made with those high-resonance pads in the background... keep 'em coming.

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Thanks for the feedback guys, really appreciate the good that im hearing. sorry for not reviewing in the past days but I've been busy with a remix and design/building of my webpages.
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UPDATED w/ better kick , less from the congas, and another pad melody in the lader break. hope you guys like it.
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Hey iloop,

Good intro, weird sample @ 0:41. Totally diggin' it. Maybe the short breakbeat part should needs some ride/hats, if you know what I mean. Good synths lateron, although the maracas seem to be a bit loud after a while.
Awesomest beat I heard in a while, here.

-weBs

thanks killa, its a kinda minimal track so thats why the basslines pretty stable, but i'll look into some more fx processing for tracks.