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Dj_Aaron_P
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Registered: Jan 2003
Location: Austin Texas

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Originally posted by Storyteller
personally I think it would need more than just a melody.
Some more sound design would be nice, more sophisticated synth sounds. And the bassline is a tad too grobbly for me. Also a kick with impact would do this track some good, same goes for the snare.


I agree with this. This track IS nearly complete. It does need a bit more boost on the kick drum and the snare is a little too light in my opinion.

HOWEVER, I think this track is complete as it is. Very proggy and deep. I really like this track. Well done!


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slyfoxark
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Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Rochester, MI

yeah, I want to help you out, I sent you an email... track sounds very nice! good work

- Adam


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zodiac9
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Registered: Oct 2005
Location: Houston, TX

I like the sound of this one, very listenable. This is a lot like what I like to write. Like Dj_Aaron_P said, it could possibly be proggy, as is. Then again, it could use a little melody. I've been told I'm good at coming up with melodies, I might give it a shot. Give us an MP3 instead of a wave, easier to download. We can send you back a wave of the melody parts, or even just a midi file, and you can insert those into the song. Can you just upload the MP3 to a file sharing site where we can download it?

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WOW.


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DJ KaRiM NeT
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Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Cairo

u don't need a complex melody ... just some nots here n there n gated vocal w/ fx ..

then u will have this track released


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4am
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Registered: Nov 2004
Location: Fort Collins, Colorado, USA

Thanks guys. I've never gotten so much response on these boards. Probably I always get buried in the promotion forum. Nobody knows my name anyway. Maybe someday I'll be famous around here. I just finished another track. It's pretty decent. I'll post it over in the promotion forum.

As for the other song, I have two people currently working on it. I'll see what they come up with. Thanks for all the replies!

Peace!
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DjGeMiNi529
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Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Brooklyn, New York

if u use fl why dont u post the flp file
would be easier i think


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FrancoR
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Registered: Jun 2003
Location: Kitee, Finland

Post the flp file of a super releaseable song isn't a good idea

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thoughtlessjex
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Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina

I'd say you'd do well to just introduce some more percussive elements. Maybe some bongos and some kind of techno-ish bandpass drum, if that makes any sense. You may also want some kind of acid sounds, but that's more a matter of opinion.

Basically, I'm saying it would be a shame to try to force a melody onto something that's not feeling a melody. Some things just aren't melodic.


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mrlachatte
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Registered: Oct 2005
Location: Kitchener, Ontario, Canada

Some chilling bongos would go really well in this song. Maybe some epic strings, too, or just string hits.


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Wandii
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Registered: Apr 2004
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Haha I'd piss myself if it's really a guy just seeing how good the response is.


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Haha I'd piss myself if it's really a guy just seeing how good the response is.



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