Youve got a nice idea, this could be a brillaint driving Trance track but it needs work.

The percussions are basic, the bass is non exsistent. This leaves a kick , snare, piano and the 2 off beat backing leads.

Beef it up a bit mate and youll have a nice tune on your hands!




http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=314255

Thanks JakeC. Is the bassline not strong enough? I think the track needs a little more complexity to it, but I can't seem to get any ideas to do that.

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Tried to get the new version, but it says the server is busy so will try again later.

Here goes the link sorry. I got a soundclick website now so here. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=459284

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Originally posted by djlogik Here goes the link sorry. I got a soundclick website now so here. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=459284

listening...bass is ok, but too much efects on it i think

oh..the piano melody is good now, suits the track well.

clap is a bit too loud.

the reverb in the breakdown has a really big tail, way too much hiss.

ok track overall, but needs work imo

keep it up

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-Nice beginning...liking it.
-That sound that comes in at 0:28 is a little loud. imo I would bring it in and out, filter it alittle...less volume
-nice piano, good build
-I really like the construction of this tune
-At 2:19 I would've faded to the break, I think it was little too long for me
-Break is not bad...no particular comments here
-Main part I think could've sounded more explosive...
-At 4:10 I would've gone right to 4:24

Nice Job

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Thanks for the input I appreciate it. Yeah that sound doesn't fit all that well if I keep it playing the whole time. I just needed some time away from the track.

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