Hi man sorry about the wait. Well I likd your tune on the whole but it should be about 1:30 shorter as it seemed to get a little repetitive. I was hoping for it to grab me but it only mildly touched me which is better than nothing I suppose. I suggest you should make or find a few good quality and funky sounding basslines and through them into the mix? Overall a good effort 7.5/10

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Originally posted by JakeC Thank you

No problem.

If you fancy checking out my tune in the forum, feel free.

i like the tune, for some reason it only played till 1.32, ??
i like the piano bit with the bass, it ads atmosphere, (spell check).
i'll try for it again in a bit. im a big reason fan, i got 3.0, its not that different from 2.5, i've made an overnighter tune as a bit of fun with a few people from the forum, if ypou want next time i'll let you know, nd you can take part, its good. any way if ya get a bita free time check it out@

http://hardbeats100.moonfruit.com/

thanx

happy creating

Song is pymp. Would appreciate more of a stereo image to it, if not just to separate the instruments.... come to think of it, is that a mono file that's uploaded?

Could you upload a stereo file?

Aside from that,

I like the beggining; perhaps a heavy bass-rich 'verb would be cool till some more instruments kick in, just to add interest. Otherwise I like the track and would add it to my playlist, if the file were stereo.

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Yo, I disagree with Xiu. I would make the piano more human maybe (ie imperfect timing, more up/down flow in velocity perhaps) but I think the piano kills the buildup perfectly. Add a killer repetative climax (like you did) and you have a perfect late night trance song.

All in all I like it. I won't give it a rating, because I don't believe they're productive, but it's a good track and there is little to nothing I would change about it, save personal preferences.

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Last edited by djglacial on Jan-04-2006 at 10:04