Listening now....

The intro sounds so much like Push its unreal
Starting to remind me of Phobos Anomaly with that big deep pad, it sits very nicely with the beat and bass.
1.55 yeah it is sounding very nice at this stage, very full. Getting really trippy and hypnotic as well. I would maybe make the kick a bit more punchy to cut through the track more.
3.47 , nice gated pads too, and a hear a nice synth coming in as well.
Really atmospheric stuff at this point. Sounding good again when the bass comes back in...equing is very good indeed, as is the overall mastering.
Overall it reminds me of Push, only less driving and focussing on more atmospheric. Maybe add in a few more percs to spice things up a bit, an open hi-hat can do wonders for a trance track

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cheers mate.

i apprieciate the kind words buddy. especially those about the mastering i always fall short on that bit and am finally learning how it works. namely the comp!

mr palm

glad it sounds better. and you like it. i hear so many tracks in progress here that i love, and then they end up changing for the worse in my eyes as they progress.

as ricky said i think maybe some more percs would work. i always loose interest in hi hats cos i dont have any sample cds so play my own. i think ill leave it like this at the mo and make a new track with more percs this time.

if you want midi i will send some to ya. theyre not quantized. i had to use a midi quantise effect cos the quantise feature is dodgy on cubase. i dont know whats wrong

cheers again guys

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i really like your style rich...reminds me of M.I.K.E. a lot with the persussion arrangements and faint strings in the background..youve mastered it well also,sounds really clear - something i need to improve on ...overall i think this is the best song ive heard from u..keep it up - now crack on with my remix

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cheers adam

hows the kick coming along now?

rich

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quote:

Originally posted by dj_palm wow the new version is so totaly much better even tho i liked the first one too. the base is so deep and its the nicest melody in the world hehe. the pads and strings u added are realy great too. personaly i would add even more hihats in the mid part to make a climax but thats just what structure i like. I think u should keep it as it is now if it feels good for you. i still want to make a remix of it man if possible.

1+, dramating improve fromn the last time LOL, this is a prove feedback helps to improve a track .
Good job .
Kopi =o.

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thanks kopi.

i have been trying very hard to take in all the feedback. i gotto admit the track doesnt sound like my usual style now though...

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I m getting the new version directly...review later!!

nice bass n clap at start....2:20..tunes comin on mee..good drive
at around 4:00 its still cumin..(gets a bit repeatative)..u can still add some more melody to take it high.

I think this tune has more of a progressive feel to it still. The percussion is lacking, but you could always add more. I feel like it's a really chill tune and that's good. I see it as having more power and drive though. The melodies are pretty nice, but a different synth sound for the main melody would probably add more to the drive on this track. Do some minor adjustments and I think this tune will be really banging

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thanks checking it out and for the suggentions funky and logik

ill take them into account on my next track

rich

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thanks for checking ashley.

it has quite a sad sound to it. ill agree transposing some of the melodies sometimes improves tracks.

oh and i sorted the spelling mistake on palomo:)

rich:)

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hi rich finally got some free time aside from my tests lol..
god I loooove the kick & bass groove sweeet
pads are very good as usual !
1:28 like that part as the kick comes in!
the "melodies" are really nice in this track, youve got great synths in here ! good luck with it!
love your tracks! !!!

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