Tja!

- Nice groove!
- Clean drums, though I think you should use some more paning on the percs, it feels a bit centered!
- I like the melody/chord-progresion!
- Good mixing!
- Liking the synths & the acid-line!
- I like the arrangement, it really keeps flowing through out the track, keeps me excited!

Great track!!
And based on the other trax I've from you, I like your style!

Keep it up,
David

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Last edited by [Alpha]Dave on Jan-15-2006 at 15:38

Thanks guys, really glad you liked it

David, I've been thinking of doing some small changes to the percussion, including a more "klicky" kick, so I'll check out the panning as well

Tiff Lacey will be putting vox on all my tracks as well, including this one

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E:mortal ft. Vicky Fee - Say What You Feel - SOLA, E:mortal - Days On End - BTR
Headstrong ft. Kirsty Hawkshaw - In in Your Eyes (E:mortal remix)- SOLA

nice stuff mate, well produced track. i like it.
strings and pads are nice. the balance of the whole mix seems a bit strange.

keep it up

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this track has got a great drive, it's definitly something different than the common uplifting trance (very different chords and structure)

i like alot the acid feast and explosion of energy before just 2:00 you seem to know what youre doing melodic wize too.

really was a nice listen

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well done in terms of production. thinking that overall the mix may be too bright? unfortunately, memory isnt' too memorable...


very nice website btw, very well done!

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Thanks guys

Ethereal, I got another guy also that said that it was a bit bass lacking, so maybe that is what is making it seem a bit bright?
I'm gonna see if I can squeeze some more bass into it, I think it will also be more pronounced with a more punchier kick, altough I don't want a kick to take over as I want the attention pointed at the melody

I'm gonna do a final check on these things when mixing in the vox

Thanks staticblue, I was aiming this one to be a bit off the wall in terms of arrangement so I guess I got it right then

djsphere, thanks man, glad you enjoyed it!
Hmm, what parts do you mean that was strange? It's a big wall of sound, was there anything that jumped at you that I could check into?

One thing I've been considering is pulling the cello more to the center as it might steal a bit too much attention panned to the left?

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E-Mortal/Fredrik Johansson www.emortal.se
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Upcoming/Latest releases:
Jan Johnston - Let the world fall apart (E:mortal remix) - Metallic Recordings
Headstrong ft. Tiff Lacey - The Truth (E:mortal remix) - SOLA
E:mortal - Lost Planet - Ministry of Sound & BTR, E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Tell me - SOLA
E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Footprints - SOLA, E:mortal ft. Tiff Lacey - Coming Home - SOLA
E:mortal ft. Vicky Fee - Say What You Feel - SOLA, E:mortal - Days On End - BTR
Headstrong ft. Kirsty Hawkshaw - In in Your Eyes (E:mortal remix)- SOLA