Originally posted by Mycron
the lead sounds like flutlicht,
very keen observation.
the intro needs some more build in it, imo, breakdown is nice... would be cool if there were some more elements in it. mainsection is sounding a bit empty. this song sounds good without vocals, i would leave it as it is and rather, work on some of the mastering.
Originally posted by DaveBegic
Had a quick listen last night. Not a bad effort there man.. the style is a bit typical and I think the chords don't really "hit it". Perhaps theres not enough happening I don't know but the tune seems kind of dated. Its a bit predictable.
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wicked drive from all the elements at the start. really dancy!
break ; string melody doesnt quite have enough emotion. not sure why... plucked melody is nice.
main lead melody is nice . maybe a different synth tho... something more original.
i think the lead is a little closed and needs more highs. it eats up a little too much headroom. and that massive drive at the beginning gets lost somewhere..
i recon mix down again and do a little mastering and it will work better.
with the right levels and some little alterations i think the track will work really well. oh and vocals like female cries would work a treat!
rich
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Jan-31-2006 11:09
Pete_B
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2004
Location: Sunderland, UK
Ok its not a bad little track this. I think the main things it needs would be more reverb on the strings (before the breakdown) and a little bass rework. Could try closing the filter a little and adding a new layer to fill up the bottom end / low mids.
