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i love anuses
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no, but seriously, they feel good
Feb-12-2006 11:14
staticblue
myloops.net
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Toulouse, France
Hey Ryan,
the mixing in this one is better than in your last track IMO, sounding pretty solid I think your percs are too "excited" or have too much highs.
The basslines and pads are sounding good here, the hibass pattern is interesting but it creates a bit of a "phase" when the subbass comes in. It's not due to the sound, just the pattern i think.
The oboe sequence is very nice, i think i had already heard it in a clip from you. Good job on the breakdown !
Overall the track is a good one, not the style i like most at the moment but definitly a nice work.
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Feb-12-2006 11:25
Dj Cola
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2005
Location: Trosa
oooh a review from the great static blue
i just poster to tell you that your track is good stuff... again
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i love anuses
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no, but seriously, they feel good
Feb-12-2006 11:50
Rayan
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Oslo
thanks Jon (Static)
and thanks Cola! yeah, a little to much highs! But you learn by doing wrong :P
Feb-12-2006 13:53
Dj Cola
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2005
Location: Trosa
tell me about it i used fruity samples for 4 months before someone told me they suck badly
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i love anuses
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no, but seriously, they feel good
Feb-12-2006 15:12
funkysouls
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Mumbai, India
i m makin a collection of ur choons brother.
excellent work
Feb-12-2006 15:49
Rayan
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Oslo
ehe!
thats funny to hear, and great to!
Feb-12-2006 17:44
Rinster
EDM Addict
Registered: Jan 2006
Location:
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Originally posted by funkysouls
i m makin a collection of ur choons brother.
excellent work
lol thats exactly what im doing to, im only missing fantasy part 1...
ryan could you please give a link? cheers mate
i really like the 1st bassline in this, unusual and originality pay off. Thought the track seems a little static for a while as compared to some of your more energetic tracks. The same melodic line hangs for over 2min...The break has some nice elements and after about 50 seconds of a long break before the oboe im now thinking this is more chillout trance which is nice to see from you. The oboe I think is great. the melody is awesome...thought i'd love to see that oboe melody go up the scale a bit more just prefrence. Main melody coming in now and it follows the chill kind of atmophere you have going here. The oboe overpowers the main synthline melody and i think they could be balanced a bit better... Personaly i think if you cut this track down to around 9min and introduce new elements a bit quicker and with more drive the track would be a bit better. Though as always you have great elements in your tracks that stand out above the amateur level onto an originality of your own. Keep up the great work.
Feb-12-2006 22:19
globalwarming
tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2006
Location: Israel, Jerusalem
very nice man!
i agree about the low frequancy... you should work more on your bassdrum, make is clearer and punchy. (i think best would fit an above & beyond kick).
good luck
Feb-12-2006 23:55
iloop
one love.
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: smalltown BC
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Originally posted by globalwarming
very nice man!
i agree about the low frequancy... you should work more on your bassdrum, make is clearer and punchy. (i think best would fit an above & beyond kick).
good luck
do you have an idea where one might find an Above and beyond kick?