ill work on it some more and try some other efx...its all about knowledge of production and its a still a bid learning curve for me..
thanks for the ears on this tune...

Listening..

Sounds good. i dont like the perc that comes in. the drum! african drum think... the lead is very dry imo. and could need some tweak imo! and think of your final mxdown, mastering of sounds! Everything here is overgoing each other! thats why you dont get a good sounds quality.

the rave lead in the middle of everything ruin all! take that out

A little advise; make kick and bass first of all. and make them fit well togeter. and you have to stay notice, and hear that it clips/ distortion on the sound.

Well thats what I have to say for now! just think about that Telling you to be nice...

nice and hard. liking it. about 2:40 got alittle too hard for a second lol.

the changes are a bit sudden at the first of the song.

i can see where some ppl might say you need more up and down, but it didnt really effect me.

about 5:00, i think i recognize that effect from an old Contra game [NES] lol. laser shot. maybe its an atari game.


yea, i can definatly say that just a few edges of the song needs to be softened. that would prolly improve it 15%.