hey takkra,

nice work here, some crits:

not liking your kick sample... vocal effects are cool... the synth is downright dirty, but it sounds a bit filtered... would be nice to have it sound really distored, i'm thinking of the lead from "ferry corsten - punk'd"

i don't hear an openhh.


got some potential here... keep it up

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You should use proper chord progression in that 8 beat bar lead and brass sound. If the brass was snapped to the same chords as the lead, this track would be bumpin.

Otherwise I like it. I think the muddy kick sounds good... but layer something harder/cleaner underneath it to make it punch you in the ears more perhaps?

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hi ethreal thanks for listening .. the lead isnt filtered.. but ill try eq'ing and putting on more distortion.. hanks for the pointers
djglacial thanks for listening and the idea of that chordprogressing.. but I cant really change it for the 8bar lead.. or else the notes would have to be different and "unfitting" ill see what I can do about the brass(=simple saw) lead

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I will listen to it and will give you a full review tonight man .
Kopi =o.

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yo takkra!

sori for the late reply

this sounds great. nice overall sound. nice and clear. i think the vocal somehow ruins the cool sound the track has. it has a electro sound to it with a nice dark trance sound to it aswell.

i would turn some of your percs up in the mix a bit - make them more of a feature. also i would cut way the main lead/bassy synth everynow and then so the track varies a bit more.

3.40 - that new synth kind of doesnt do it for me. maybe add some efx to it/transpose it down and lower the volume. then i think it will sit better in the mix.

this is very original stuff here rico. with the right tweeking im sure the track will be really great. i can imagine this working well on an electro set or as a track on 'club elite sessions'.

definately your best rico

rich

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Dirty. Very Dirty.

I like what you've done with the female vocal sample.

Great layering around 4:22.

I'm with rich on bringing out the percs, though. This is tech trance, the percs should be a bit more prominent.

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its got some nice original elements and arrangement, but definately not something i like to listen to on a regular bassis... i think its just not my style. I think the kick and percs could be brought up a bit cause some of the mid elements overdominate in this track, but otherwise fine...

Hey guys, im so sorry I reply so late.. school is very busy these days.. ive got anoter testperiod coming up boohoo

Ok everyone convinced me I should bring the percs out more! thanks for that im really glad most of you liked the track! thanks everyone !

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