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Originally posted by dj_kane cheers everyone for the feedback. going to work on your suggestions and post the full version up soon. rich glad to see your back to liking my tracks lol although that last track was awful i had to delete it lol your advice spurred me on to make this one cheers

i didnt mean i didnt like the last track lol! i was just saying what could be improved on it..

this is definately better tho good work bro

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i didnt like the last track myself anyway. just needed an excuse to delete it lol.

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Where's the rest? I loved this song. It felt like you were building up to something....then it just ends. More please. Edit: Unless you are keeping the rest to yourself for copyright reasons...

You had some really cool effects in there...

Edit: I'm still new to making music myself so I tend to miss things in reviews I do for others. I do agree that another kick drum should be used - something a little looser in my opinion.

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thanks daw. still working on it so once its finished the full version will be available.

cheers for the feedback mate.

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yo mate,

nice tune, very much better than your last one imo.

most things i have to say were already mentoined.
kick and bassline together remembers me a bit of the pvd stuff. sounds great and very driving indeed.
anyway, the kick could be a bit deeper, the release on the bassline is a little bit to long imo.

i like the melody that fades in during the break. realy has some potential imo.

keep on working.

cheers, nik.

thanks everyone for the feedback

track updated

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0.50 ...Love the liquidy drips panning around. they sound great.

As mentioned already, the kick is killer.

1:20 Great first impressions so far. nice long release acidy mids.

1:50 bass is warm. I like the high horror movie squill pads.

2:30 Nice use of left/right space on the mid synth.

3.00 the break doesnt have much momentum imo. Maybe add some more fx or pads. Not sure what to suggest, but it doesnt build up...

3:22 pretty nice groovy pattern change. the frequencies are a bit harsh.

3:55 the bass sounds out of tune.


Impressive work Dj Kane. I enjoyed it.

Grab the psy/tech/experimental alliance sig if you like. I'm definitely adding you to that alliance after listening to this great tunezerz.

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update - the kick has a big punch! nice kick!

percs are nice. not too generic. i like your background noises you have going on.. like the single note flute sound...

structure - the build is nice. the bass is great! really driving!

break- i can here m.i.k.e influences here really spacey.

kick comes back - this is quite psy sounding. i love the original notation. - single bassnote clashes with it... your gonna have to follow that melody with the bass..... and use some of your driving percs during this point. the ones you used at the build..

also id say introduce that main melody very subtly during the break.

great stuff! you are progressing very well

rich

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it sounds very nice liked it what are you using as sequencer ?

btw , thanks for comenting at my thread

Greetz

//Alex

haven't got time to produce at the minute with all my uni work but ive got a version of the track on myspace. not the original version, this version is called the "deep edit".

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Dude, I dont see the link to listen to it .
Kabuki o(.

the track is on my myspace page. its not the finshed version though. the breakdown needs to be much neater, making a lot of changes to that and the outro needs fixing. although i need people to tell me whether its got a good sound to it.

cheers

HERES THE LINK JUST IN CASE! CLICK

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