The kick sounds too EQed and fluffy for something supposed to be so hard.

The hats are *awesome*.

1:44 here we go!

2:22 enjoying the track so far, nice synth coming in

I really like I'm at 3:30 and no breakdown yet.. the energy is moving nice.. ah here's the breakdown, nice and smooth.

Swelling synths are lovely, nice release of the filter there.

The kick is working better for me now, but it could be even better.

The break at 7:45ish sounds very fake, it's perhaps too fast, and the bass isn't backing it up. It disrupts the flow of the track, partly because of the kick, which doesn't seem to work as well by itself as it does while driving the mix during the climaxes.

So yeah, overall, I love the track, but the kick's lowend and high clicky bits just don't work for my taste when they're playing during the quieter parts of the mix. Good synth choices and percs, really really amazing percs, and nice work with your fx.

Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for the comments.
I agree with the comments about the kick somewhat. It's a bit too thumpy, in a bad way.

Looking back, I regret that I made this track so hard. Because it's really not my style. I should have made it slower, about 136 bpm. And a smoother groove that would have fit the main melody better.
Actually, I might do a remix of it.