Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
thank you NN for your kind words and advice
mavve thanks for the pointers !! glad you liked!
ehh ashley wtf?? is that a positive opinion ?
and to dj alliance, glad you liked it the track isnt finished though.. but when its done you are free to get the midi and remix it
thanks for listening all of you !!
Originally posted by Takkra
thank you NN for your kind words and advice
mavve thanks for the pointers !! glad you liked!
ehh ashley wtf?? is that a positive opinion ?
and to dj alliance, glad you liked it the track isnt finished though.. but when its done you are free to get the midi and remix it
thanks for listening all of you !!
but make it fade out over a longer period and dissapear whaen a new part is introduced.
more little percs fill it out more. - nice choices
keep your awsome saw bass for later. make the track more dj friendly build the track more and bring the bass in at about the 1 min mark imo. so it comes in just as the dj transition has finished.
again with the same synth you use at the very beginning make the fade out. a lot longer and drawn out so it fills more.
piano - still great. maybe a bit too much verb there. and still a bit loud. turn it down quite a bit imo na dboost your mids and highs of the saw bass. make that come out more. its one of the best parts and it gets lost behind the rest.
also id lower the long note synth strings melody in the mix a bit and lower it by an octave to give it more of a dark feeling.
your kick is so techno! i love it with the added percs that give the kick a multiple kick rolling sound. drive is huge.
overall i think this is superb! awsome work. the most finished piece you have done and the most bangin. definately make more of a feature of your percs and bass tho! use the piano and synth strings as atmosphere and let your 'takkratech' do the rest
your best track matey!!
rich
pm'd
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Apr-03-2006 08:59
sterilis
Sunset Ibiza
Registered: May 2005
Location: Belfast/Ibiza/Manchester
bass is nice but i find the kick weak, doesnt stand out enough imo.
percs are worked well
like the piano but i think there is too much effects on it. would like to hear it more clearer less effects.
like the pad in the breakdown and the melody is nice but the paino is very overpowering.
like where your going with it has real dutch trance trends in it. the best form of trance imo.
i think you could make this a stormer with a bit of work.
@********: I'd have to say there is too much muddiness around the lower end of the spectrum.
@Takkra: I like everything except the piano because of the extreme distortion on it. The bass is pretty damn awesome. It's you all the way. Only thing to watch out for like Nomen said...techy sounds work well, but not all work well with a trancer.
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Apr-03-2006 19:07
Effero
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2006
Location: Canada
I like the melodies, it's definitelly harmonic. The drum sequences are very important in trance and they have to be as with much variety as the rest of the track. That's something that needs improvement. The bass is sweet and driving...very good.
I also liked the piano, it's unusual and original.
Keep it up
Effero
Apr-03-2006 19:33
Takkra
Smile if you want it.
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
First of all im sorry for replying so late.. (im in the middle of a testweek so im really busy studying )
thank everyone for your time and listening to my track you too ashley
to rich.. ill try to make a nice catchy intro.. I had one before this, but I found that it sounded too empty though.. so thats why I made this kind of "intro".. thanks for your really helpfull advice too !!!
dj kane, I think I know what you mean because after hearing the song alot I think its sounds too muddy.. and with the piano effects turned off its alot less muddy.. so I dont know what im going to do about that, because I do want to keep the distortion a bit .
Dj Logik im glad you liked the track still figuring out the style hehe
and effero thanks for your kind words ! glad you liked it too!
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Apr-05-2006 13:49
dj alliance
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2006
Location: Scotland
quote:
Originally posted by richg101
you re gonna love my rmx when its done mate!
its sounding quite techno tho!
rich
Im doing one too mate, mines is very euphoric.
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Apr-05-2006 14:15
Takkra
Smile if you want it.
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
I really like your piano, but imo its too much distortion...
Mixdown is too loud, sounds like all the channels volume are on max...
I like the bassline, much drive in it..
Percs in break is good. Adds very much to the break.
I hope you clean this up, its a great track, just needs a little more work.
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
thank you for listening speactra!
im cleaning up the track atm im not very good in eq'ing and compressing and stuff so itll take a while
glad you liked the track !!
?? is that a positive opinion 
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im really looking forward to them!!!!
