cheers majatsu. unfortunately i havent had a chance to llok at the areas you stated. ill look at them next time.

anyway heres the latest version. let me know if they kick is better.

ive eq'ed the bass more but im not sure if i like it. let me know.

cheer

kane

CLICK

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As I stated earlier, I like this track. It has a nice feel to it. Kick is better now. Nice fx work but some have too much highs on them. Otherwise nice track and has originality. Keep up the good work mate!

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cheers mate! yea going to sort those efx out.

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Hey... this is definitely original, the dark atmosphere of the track is really cool!! The bass sound could be little bit fatter, imo the kick is fine. Sounds little bit atonal time to time, I don´t know if you meant it...Nice effect before 3:00... I don´t like too much the vocals but a matter of personal taste. The lead sounds takes too much space in the sound spectrum not leaving place for anything else and it´s also way too loud. You could try fixing it with the eq...

It´s an original track... !!

Cheers, Lakeus

cheers Lakeus

going to sort all problems out when i get a chance. want to leave it for a few days. sick of listening to it at the minute.

cheers tho!

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beh, what a track to remix... why? the melodies are horrible- just my opinion, but their so full of offkeyness, + the arrangement and build-ups don't really help all that much to distract you from the horibleness of the melodic lines. Overall the track sounds too empty and doesn't do it for me...

obviously not to your taste then lol

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hmm..maybe I shouldnt review these type of tracks when Im sick...

anyways..good start, but somewhere at the 2 minute mark it sounds way off-key..sounds false. after that its ok.

the big synths at 4.25 sounds mono/muffled-like..is there any frequency low on that?

When the track is in full "bloom" it sounds to soft/mellow, but maybe thats the style? I wanted more hi-hats, cymbals, alittle more drive.

take care,

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EQ'ed the track too much. binned it. starting a new one. thanks for the feedback everyone. hopefully my next track is better.

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Hey,

commenting as I listen...
Good kick, great mysterious atmosphere. The elements work well together.
Some nice FX that work well in the overall mix.
1:55 ... this is evil, maybe a little muddy in the lower frequencies, but a nice acidline, seems a little Psyish to me. Me likes!
In my opinion the breakdown could come to the point straighter.
The lead starting at ~4:30 is too muddy and too dominant IMO. It takes away a lot of space for other elements needed in the track.

Overall, it sounds kinda promising, I'd have another look especially at the main part.
Keep it up!

oh, good that I read your last posting AFTER commenting ... anyway, good luck with your next attempt

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nice kick, liking the atmosphere..

haha didnt expect those vocals.. its the "famous" Kai Tracid vocalist.. i remember this voice.. the melody after the break is a bit repeteive and is going on for too long.. u could have made a different ending to the track imo..

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