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nice track very dark, chill and epic, dreamy at same time, what must be sorted out is the hats feels like their cuting eachother , might be bad sample quality. how ever the kick is to flat try making it deeper, love the dreamy atmosphere you got here , I think you can make the buildup more energic but that´s a question of taste. keep it up, and the melody shoud be teaked an lifted some more maybe. other wise nice comp on it, every stage is good with new elements, track is done if the small things mentioned by us gets sorted, try adding some deep vocals to =) cheers - Mavve.

Edit would be nice to get a review on the uppdate of Electric culture its here somewhere in the forums , Tnx

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Just downloaded... listening now.

0:20. Nice pads. I really like it.
1:00. more pads, a little synth. The synth sounds like the timing on its attack does not match the percussion.
1:40. Yea... there's definitely a little timing issue with the percussion. Sounds like there is some shuffle in there, but inconsistently.
2:40. Pads are back. I like them, but the bass doesn't go with them at all... or really... there just isn't enough bass.
3:17. Now the percussion issue is pretty bad. It sounds like some of your percussion is shuffled and some of it isn't... or something weird. Also, the phrasing seems kinda off. There is some kinda 1 or 2 bar phase shift between when phrases of melody end and where new percussion comes in/goes away.
4:50. Synth sounds are neat, but muddy. Needs more attack or less sustain.
5:15. Bass is kinda annoying. It doesn't go with the melody and it has no flow at all... it just sounds like something humming away in the background.
6:40. Same comment about the synths and bass. The bass needs to carry the melody, and it doesn't.

So you've got a few issues to take a look at. I also think this track could use more percussion to make it more interesting. I really like the melody in the pads at the start; I'm disappointed that this wasn't brought out better in the rest of the track.

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ok cheers for the comments Elyot,the reason for the percussion sounding shuffled is cos some of it is double delayed to give a fuller feel..to be honest i m pretty happy with this track...not many things i want to change..the basslines need tweaking i know..

this is just my style of trance - i dont like to stick to certain rules of normal producing..if i like the sound of my tracks i generally just leave them

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ok...finally put an updated 128 kbps version on www.myspace.com/magdelayna .....changed the second bassline around a bit

adam

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