Hey... it´s a nice progressive trancer. The kick is full and deep but also soft! Personnally I don´t like the kick but it´s a matter of personal taste. There could be another sub-bass because now the bass gets lost with the arpeggio. You could also try to eq some lower frequencies out from the arpeggio to make the bass more audible. Nice calm sounds...

As someone said already the ambient noise in the background is really cool. Nice hihat at 3:10... Overall it´s a nice track but still lacks something soundwise to be totally professional, nice effort anyway!!

Cheers, Lakeus

I like the bass in the intro.

Lakeus is right about the arp + bass. They interfere too much. For one thing, the arp is way too loud. You also need lome more low on the bass by this point.

Actually, without much on the bass, a lot of drive is lost. I get something of a laid back feel. Maybe that's the point, but the bass could be better suited to that feel, and it could be more prominent.

That kick roll at 5:58 felt very forced. Almost like it was there because it was supposed to be. Could have been handled better, IMO. I would have done some kind of edit or cut instead.

Breakbeat is nifty, but the synths in that section are a bit too loud, and grate on the ears.

Roll at 8:17 was much more natural because it was coming out of a breakbeat. Good drive when you get back to the chorus.

Pretty good stuff. A few things need work here and there, but it's a good concept.

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wow..first of all a big thanks to ALL you guys for taking time to listen to the track and for such great insights and comments, I really appriciate it.

Great that so many of you gave detailed and constructive comments and I will definatly incorporate most of your suggestions.

unfortunalty I got sick as a dog this weekend so I probably wont do much on the track any time soon, since I barely have strength to sit up straight and type this.

but keep your eyes open for an updated version sometime this week.
once again, thank you so much!

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I updated the track as you can see in my original post. Please let me know how it works.

take care,

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listening:

starting with the bass like this seems a bit wierd for me.. and its going on for a bit long without nothing happening.. percussions seems a bit thin..

and the track is very long.. arp is nice and everything sounds very "clean" i would have tried making some more effects and stuff.. this track does have potential..

breakbeat part is pretty cool..

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Thanks for listening...and Im starting to agree with you regarding the bass. lets see if I cant rearrange some things.

more effects on the arp and main lead or just more ambient fx/sounds?

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