I'm going to try my best since Trance isn't really my cup of tea:

As mentioned earlier, the hi-hat seems a tad too weak. I like the little panning synth, adds a depressing vibe to it (you should take it our for a while though, it gets a tad bit repetitive)?

Well, to me it does. The synths are a bit dry; you should try to work on that. I'm digging the build-up. At 3:13 (i'm guessing the breakdown?) I like that flute-ish synth... I don't know what is about synths like that, but I really like them.

Good job on bringing back the percussion/energy to the track, that little build-up was very good.

Overall: the energy in the track is superb; the mixing needs work, and beefing up the synths a bit would do good also.

gbye.

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thanks for the ideas r.j...will look into it anymore comments

sounds like 'love parade' that bass you got.

the panning sound gets quite annoying. i feel like the track is missing something. just read a previous comment and agree with Salegon about the first 2:30 mins.

breakdown has potential just feel the build up let it down. the track picks up after this and gets more listenable.

just the first part as mentioned needs looking at.

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thanks kane will look at the intro and see what i can do with it ..thanks for the feecback anybody else much apreciated....

nice original percussion.

turn bassline and percs up imo.

synths are a bit too trancy for the overall sound imo. give them some heavy sidechain triggered by the kick to make the sound more groovy..

im a bit too pissed to properly comment on the track..

sounds cool and original from what i can hear and take into my pissed mind..

rich

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good tune i like it:

- you have an original way of putting the beat and the melody together
- the beat is a bit thin i could use more weight.
- the melody is cool, the elements are well put together.
- i'm not sure about the style, it changes quite a lot, but somehow all the elements come together.
- high hats and claps... um... missing something maybe a small delay? and better compression.

okay mate cheers...

W!SO

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thanks for the feedback rich and wiso ill keep workin on it with your suggestions...any more ideas anyone...